英语书面表达步步练 第1集
by Mr Shu
大家好！我是“美美与共Mr舒”。Nice to meet you！许多同学说，英语书面表达很难，希望我开展一些系列讲座，为同学们指点迷津。从今天开始，我就回应同学们的要求，对英语书面表达进行一些点拨，也让同学们进行实战练习，一步步地走向成功。
题目：
每年3月5日是雷锋纪念日。你知道雷锋的哪些可贵精神和感人事迹？作为青少年，我们该如何学习雷锋？学习他的哪些精神品质？怎样才能既有利别人，又有利自己，达到双赢？请你写一篇短文，说说你的看法。
参考范文：
How can we learn from Lei Feng?
Lei Feng is an inspiration to us all. He was kind. He was so kindhearted that he was always ready to help others. He helped others. I have my own room. We should learn from Lei Feng.
As a middle school student, as a pupil,I live in a small house. It’s a small green house. I’m going to have a busy weekend! we have a lot of things to do.
First of all, we should keep healthy, we must have warm hearts and get ready to help others.On weekdays I get up at six o’clock. I have breakfast at seven and then I go to school by bike. We begin our class at eight o’clock in the morning.
Second, we must study hard. We should be helpful. In the morning I get up at six. I put on my clothes and put on my shoes at 6:05. I wash my face and brush my teeth at 6:10. Then I eat my breakfast with my family at six thirty.We must study hard and try our best to be better every day. On Saturday morning I always have English classes at school.This can help us strong and helpful. This is the most important thing for us students.
Third, we can learn from our teachers. we should volunteer our time to help other people when necessary. There are forty-two students in our class . There are also two American boys .We shouldn't always watch TV or use phones. We can help old people cross the street, go to the old people’s home to help clean up their house and cheer them up.
On the bus, we can be helpful and kind. we can give our seats to people who are old or people that have babies in their arms.
In a word, we can be careful. They are Jack and Mike. They are our good friends. They like watching TV, but they don’t like playing basket-ball. They often go to school by bike.we should be friendly to all the people who are friendly to us.
All in all, we should study hard and stay healthy. We must make our country stronger and stronger.
点拨：
舒老师认为，写好段落要注意以下三个标准：
第一，段落要有统一性：要围绕一个中心来写，不要东拼西凑。
第二，段落要有完整性：必须有主题句，必须有发展句，而且，发展句均要围绕着主体展开，这样，你写出的文章才显得内容丰富，条理清晰。
第三，段落要有连贯性。形连，使用过渡词或过渡句；意连，内容上的要连贯。不要东一句，西一句。
同学们，你们看了此文后有什么收获？你们希望得到哪些方面的具体指导呢？欢迎提问！欢迎点单！咱们下次再见！
美美与共Mr舒 祝大家学习快乐！心想事成！
