大作文开头段写作技巧(二)

大作文开头段写作技巧(二)

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本次主要内容分享的是雅思写作大作文开头段写作技巧2,废话不多说,直接说内容:

先说一下上次分享作业答案:

These days, more and more companies allow employees to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this pattern?

技巧:改写题目 观点

答案:Working from home seems to become increasingly popular these days. I think the trend has both positive and negative outcomes.

改写题目分析:

1. work from home 放到了主语的位置替换掉了more and more companies

2. More and more companies 替换成为了 increasingly popular

(注释:换主语最简便方法就是宾语变主语,主动变被动)

分析题目最重要的是我们应当找出题目当中的关键词,进而了解到考官主要想让我们说哪方面的事,本题目关键词毫无疑问是work from home 也就是所谓的Teleworking 远程工作,然后在根据关键词来进行题目改写。

有时改写题目在换词与换主语的基础上,我们还可以增补一些其他的成分,增补成分技巧是从以下角度出发:想原因,结果,目的,对比,举例,可以用从句,并列句,介词短语或者动词不定式来表述。

1. 想原因:As a result of the advent of the internet, many people, these days, are able to work from home on the computer.(介词短语)

2.想结果:The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home.

3.举例子:working from home seems to become increasingly popular in some occupations such as editors, programmers and designers.(介词短语)

4.作对比:Traditionally, work is done in such places as the office and the factory. However, this situation has changed, with more and more people choosing to work from home on the computer.

5.想目的: In order to increase job flexibility and working efficiency, an increasing number of companies now begin to encourage their workers to finish their job assignments from home on the computer.(动词不定式)

观点句分析:观点句为优缺点类型常用套句。

I think the trend has both positive and negative outcomes.

此类套句还有以下几种:

1.I think the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks.

2.This phenomenon has some benefits, although its drawbacks should not be ignored.

3.Although this trend has some benefits, there are some problems that we should pay attention to.

4.This pattern has some benefits, though it may lead to some problems.

5.This new pattern brings about advantages as well as disadvantages.

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